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Mimi Graney's avatar

Thrilled to more of your writing!

Say more about why the “we’re not homeless, we’re house less” pisses you off. If this same anger is the through line - and maybe it’s just the initial motivation but not the true heart? - as a reader we want to know more here.

You very much have a book growing. The pacing for an article is a nice clip and you’ve set some vivid scenes. I see places where, with a bigger canvas, you could give texture to the other characters - including to yourself - in the story. Like, how did you feel getting this job after mostly unemployment? How did your relationships change with and without formal organizational roles?

Jeremy Rosen's avatar

Boston was more interesting in the 80’s then I thought growing up in Brookline!

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